- Using a dolly, the shot will begin following down a school corridor, the dolly will firstly move at a slow pace then gradually speed up and stop on a wall with a bloody hand print on it.
- Film title will appear written in blood as the camera zooms out to a birds eye view of the school
- Next scene we will see a pan shot of a group of friends walk down the school to go to prom, they don't need to speak but need to look happy and excited.
- Next the friends will walk down the same corridor as the one with the hand print, they all stop and look at the hand print.
- Friend 1: Whats this?
- Friend 2: It's probably just someone pulling a prank, don't worry about it.
- Friend 3: That is a bit weird, she's got a point. Maybe we should tell someone!
- Friend 2: No! lets just go to prom.
- The friends exit the corridor and approach the hall doors to enter prom
- Suddenly a mans figure will appear from around the corridor, holding a knife
- We next see the friends partying and having a good time
- Friend 2: Where's (friend 1)?!
- Friend 3: She's probably gone to the toilet or something, who cares?
- Friend 2: No (friend 3)! I told you this all seems weird! We've got to find her!
- As the friends leave we see the figure of the man holding a knife once again, this time a blood splatter shoots out and we hear a women's scream.
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Audience comments on the scripts we wrote:
- Ferns idea liked, not like any other horror film out there
- Kayas idea liked, the idea of cutting from the police to graphic scenes in
- Kayas idea - liked the sudden change from happy Polaroid's to graphic police scenes
- Ferns idea - liked the nursery rhymes
- We need to think of the practicality of our ideas and how we are going to portray them
From the audience comments we have decided it would be best to choose Ferns idea as it is the most realistic (with our budget and location) and has the best story line for us to build from.
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